Comments on: One down http://luni.net/?p=626 The musings of a Norwegian At Large Mon, 31 May 2010 19:46:11 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: Almost Beautiful Scar « Wicked Redhead http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-6002 Almost Beautiful Scar « Wicked Redhead Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:39:33 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-6002 [...] Gunnar Helliesen [...] [...] Gunnar Helliesen [...]

]]> By: Cora Zane http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5989 Cora Zane Sun, 19 Apr 2009 03:37:25 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5989 Whoa! The guy Twittered it! Brilliant! :-O Whoa! The guy Twittered it! Brilliant! :-O

]]> By: Christine http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5984 Christine Sat, 18 Apr 2009 16:14:40 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5984 Nice piece! Loved the twist at the end. This is the first WAG I've read by you and I hope it's not the last. This was highly entertaining and would make a killer short story. Nice piece! Loved the twist at the end. This is the first WAG I’ve read by you and I hope it’s not the last. This was highly entertaining and would make a killer short story.

]]> By: Writing Adventure Group #7 « Lady Stone http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5983 Writing Adventure Group #7 « Lady Stone Sat, 18 Apr 2009 11:27:01 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5983 [...] Gunnar Helliesen [...] [...] Gunnar Helliesen [...]

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5974 J. M. Strother Fri, 17 Apr 2009 00:55:44 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5974 Rather disturbing, and I mean that well. What you did was build up empathy for the little boy, and then take the reading in a wholly unexpected direction to leave them stunned and amazed. At this point it is too soon to tell if it is the little boy or St. John who is the demon, and there is the promise of great suspense and action in the future. Very well done indeed. ~jon Rather disturbing, and I mean that well. What you did was build up empathy for the little boy, and then take the reading in a wholly unexpected direction to leave them stunned and amazed. At this point it is too soon to tell if it is the little boy or St. John who is the demon, and there is the promise of great suspense and action in the future. Very well done indeed.
~jon

]]> By: Sharon Donovan http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5973 Sharon Donovan Thu, 16 Apr 2009 21:12:34 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5973 Very captivating and fast-paced, Gunnar. More! Very captivating and fast-paced, Gunnar. More!

]]> By: Gunnar Helliesen http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5966 Gunnar Helliesen Thu, 16 Apr 2009 14:24:11 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5966 Thank you everyone for your kind comments! It's not part of a book, at least not yet, but I've been thinking about writing more about St John. He intrigues me. Actually "Two down" is more or less written already, I just didn't realize it at the time.. Thanks again, and thank you Nixy for hosting the WAG! Thank you everyone for your kind comments!

It’s not part of a book, at least not yet, but I’ve been thinking about writing more about St John. He intrigues me. Actually “Two down” is more or less written already, I just didn’t realize it at the time..

Thanks again, and thank you Nixy for hosting the WAG!

]]> By: Sue O'Shields http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5961 Sue O'Shields Thu, 16 Apr 2009 00:39:06 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5961 Whoa! Talk about a left turn in The Reality Road. Thanks for dropping me into a very pleasant colorful world and abandoning me a little fuzzy, wondering what St John is all about. Nicely crafted! Whoa! Talk about a left turn in The Reality Road. Thanks for dropping me into a very pleasant colorful world and abandoning me a little fuzzy, wondering what St John is all about. Nicely crafted!

]]> By: Mickey Hoffman http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5960 Mickey Hoffman Wed, 15 Apr 2009 22:19:20 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5960 I do hope that was only in your imagination! :) Is that part of a book? I do hope that was only in your imagination! :) Is that part of a book?

]]> By: Iain Martin http://luni.net/?p=626&cpage=1#comment-5959 Iain Martin Wed, 15 Apr 2009 19:11:54 +0000 http://luni.net/?p=626#comment-5959 Good pace and detail; leaves me wanting the next installment, i.e., "Two Down." Good pace and detail; leaves me wanting the next installment, i.e., “Two Down.”

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